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Egg's avatar

Oh, this is excellent writing! "Don't you think mankind deserves an empty throne?" is SUCH a good line, especially paired with the "At least the angel respected her enough to put in some effort this time." It has solid pacing for a short story too (something I've never been the best at, my writing always ends up getting longer, haha!)

My friend sent this to me tonight after an email exchange, and I really enjoyed it!

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Brett, Jeremy W's avatar

Wow. This one just left me stunned!

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